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My typical day.
Today, I want to tell you about my typical day. Actually, my life isn't very active and amazing, but I'll try tell you something interesting.
I get up often at half past six, but sometimes, when I want to sleep a little longer, I get up at seven o'clock. In the morning I have a breakfast, make the bed, do my hair, and after that, I go out of my house and go to school.
At school, I'm as usual bored, because I have no time to communicate with my friends and a (или the подскажите предлго) breaks between lessons are very short.
After school, almost always I have music or English classes. It's interesting and useful for me. I really enjoy it.
After classes I go home. When I come home, I often feel exhausted and very hungry. Typically I have dinner, and then I get started to do my homework. Then, I can't think about something other than sleep.
The my essay ending, because now, I'm going to sleep.

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TodayI want to tell you about my typical day. Actually, my life isn't veryactive and amazing, but I'll try to tell you something interesting.
I often get up at half past six, but sometimes, when I want to sleep alittle longer, I get up at seven o'clock. In the morning I have breakfast, make the bed, do my hair, and after that, I leave home and go to school.
At school I'm usually bored, because I have no time to communicatewith my friends and the breaks betweenlessons are very short.
After school, I almost always have music or English classes. It's interesting and useful for me. I really enjoy it.
After classes I go home. When I come home, I often feel exhausted andvery hungry. Typically I have dinner, and then I start to do myhomework. Then, I can't think about anything but going to bed.
Now I end my essay because I'm going to bed.

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I'll try to tell you
i often get up half past six
i leave from my house
the breaks are very short
i listen music
after classes i go to
i have a dinner
after "and" we don't use then
i start
other than sleeping

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